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PostSubject: Gurepu    Sun Feb 04, 2018 4:16 am



Personal Information

Name: Gurepu
Race: Saiyan
Home Planet: Planet Salda
Gender: Male
Age: 11

Appearance

Overall:Clearly having been descended from a saiyan, he has the racial staples of hair that defies logic and gravity, a body so solid you would be mistaken for assuming he could benchpress a planet, and being of a slightly shorter stature then most normal people.
Height: 5'2"
Weight: 135 lbs.
Face Claim: Gohan

Personality

Overall:. To put it quite simply, many would assume him to be a stark raving lunatic. He goes on about pride for the Saiyan race. He goes about training almost constantly with the goal of becoming the next legendary super saiyan
Likes: Fighting, Training, Eating
Dislikes:Lazy People, Liars, Kids
Motivations:To become the General of the Saiyan Army
Fears: Dying before being glorified in battle and getting revenge for his parents death.

Origin

History: Gurepu was born to saiyan parents who were only fodder for the Saiyan Army. After their deaths in battle he joined the Saiyan Army to seek revenge and to soon be the leader.
Family: Thares (Dad), Asura  (Mother)

Role-play

Attributes:
- Health:5
- Stamina:5
- Speed:5
- Ki Manipulation:5
- Martial Arts:5
Ki Pool: 200
Alignment: Evil
Other Characters: None
Referral: DBZ: New Era
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PostSubject: Re: Gurepu    Sun Feb 04, 2018 4:24 am

Okay, just a few things here.

First, since you have a picture, I won't request that you expand your appearance, but I will request that you definitely expand on history, as well as your personality. 2-3 lines isn't enough.

Second, an 11 year old saiyan would be a very unlikely candidate for the army. You can keep this if you want, but I would advise against it.

Third, we don't have a planet Vegeta, it is Planet Sadala.

Edit and I'll check it out again.
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